Gerard Donovan
A town during a war. A field. The baker digs a hole. The teacher, whom he recognises after a short while, stands above him smoking and checking his watch. Bored soldiers look on from a distance.
The central conceit of the work requires that the roles of the two men in that field be kept veiled from the reader until the end. It is presumably a grave that is being dug. One of the men is perhaps the overseer, or collaborator, the other about to be shot. But we don’t know which, and can’t tell from the conversation. This means the interaction between them maintains a sometimes artificial ambiguity. Slowly the previous history of the men is revealed in their conversation. But even then, it is in unsatisfactory generalities.
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I understand the premise is to have an unspecified European country, an unspecified war. I love the idea in fact. But the way Donovan implements it doesn’t grab me. There is too much artifical vagueness. The author is not taking his subject seriously enough. The idea that ordinary people can be implicated in mass murder fascinates him, but doesn’t bother him unduly. Ideas and situations from history are introduced, but it’s all lacking in passion.
Both are educated men (the Baker an autodidact) and willing to take on theatrical roles. They create mini-dramas, news reports from history, an engmatic fairy tale. It’s not very plausible, but it could be claimed the novel is straying far from realistic fiction. Every 40 pages or so there is another hint of impending violence to keep up the tension.
Philosophers are mentioned, but there is nothing which might suggest that there are things beyond the comprehension of the reader. It’s all easily digestible. The chapters too are often one or two pages. The titles are quirkily cryptic: What The Baker Knows. The Evidence According to John Locke. Types of Wind and their Effects on the Human Condition. There is great consideration of the reader’s limited intelligence in this work, while skillfully giving the impression that he/she is encountering big thoughts. I don’t blame the author for this. It’s what has to be done to get by the barrier and get it published.
The work is unusual and ambitious enough to make it a worthwhile read. It’s courageous enough to veer far from realism. I think of all the agents’ readers: “What, he mentions Hume and Schopenhauer? Too pretentious!”
I would like to like it more. Perhaps the tricks and contrivances to give it tension and make it palatable are too obvious. Maybe the blurbs have had a contrasuggestible effect on me.
This story would work best the same length as one of Kafka’s tales, not as a 300 page novel.